The Burnt

Tegemist on loo tutvustusega, kuid varsti kirjutan ma selle terve loo valmis.

                                    The Burnt  
       
       Long Long ago lived a lonely girl, her name was Camomille, she lived with her sister Rose.      
      They  did everything together. They didn´t have father or mother so they lived by themselves.    
     Camomille was the youngest 10 years old and Rose was 12. They had a black cat, his name    
      was Carry. That day, when Rose got a friend,Elize then Camomille got really jelous. She
     wanted to kill her so badly. One day Camomille got in a fight with Rose and then Rose
      took offense and went to her friend house to spend a night there. Camomille felt very lonely.
     The first thing in the morning Rose went back home to check on Camomille. She didn´t find her
     anywhere, she invited Elize to search with her. Finally they found her in the basement, standing  
    there with a candle in her hand, all wet and covered with blood. Then she made a big bloody    
     smile and looked at us, after a while, she said :"You all gonna burn!".

See tutvustus annab pool jutu sisu ära, asi oleks palju huvitavam, kui see oleks salapärasem, mitte nii konkreetne. Kas see jutt tuleb ka ingliskeelne?

Jah,see lugu tuleb kahjuks inglise keeles,kuna leidsin,et eesti keeles ei tule see nii õudne välja  

Ma sain nüüd selle valmis,aga seal on väiksed vead sees c: Ma lugesin seda mõndadele ja nad ütlesid et see tuli päris hirmuäratav cX

Tervet lugu paluks...

Mul pole aega olnud et seda ülesse postitada aga kui ma aega leian postitan,tänan ootamast :)