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Missing u


I look happy all the time,
I smile, I laugh, I act as blind,
But what no-one really finds,
Is the sadness covering my mind.

Even though I know how bad it all was,
And you’ve no idea what pain you caused,
I can’t stop missing the thing I’ve lost,
Your arms and me in your sweet hold.

Why, please tell me why you rejected me?
Wasn’t I what you hoped I would be?
Did my reappearance finally made you see,
That you’re still not ready and should flee?

The hole in my heart isn’t leaving,
Even though I hoped it was healing.
I don’t want to have those feelings,
I know you’re not worth all this.

I want to let you know how I feel inside,
But I can’t tell you what you must find,
If you’d ever care to waste your time,
On wondering, is she fine?

I’m really close to letting my mind go,
Just following my heart with the flow.
Write you saying I really miss you,
Love you and want to be where you are too.

I don’t want this to be that difficult,
Why can’t we say what we really want to?
Although you’ll probably never read this poetry,
I know you have the chance of accessing it.

Please, heart, ease up a bit,
It’s really difficult to live like this,
When your mind is always alert,
And looking for someone like him.
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Reverse

So long time has passed,
Which seems even long than it is,
The space between us is vast,
Yet a reconnecting bridge is built.

The worst part is ignorance,
What you try to stick to so badly.
Why won’t you accept my forgiveness?
Let it go and let me be?

Why do you still cross my mind?
Why does he always talk of you?
Why can’t you state loudly what can’t let go by?
Why, oh why do you have to be so confused??

I was doing so great at the beginning,
You were a traitor and that was fine.
You seemed to be lost and started smoking,
I felt okay since you weren’t mine.

Then I left and from you not a word,
Though you’re claimed to still have feelings,
Towards me, like that day, that flirt,
But did you really mean it?

You ought to know how stubborn I am,
Therefore no easy ‘getting over it’,
You would have to work hard to get me back,
Maybe even change your country.

For how long I will wait for thy,
I sincerely don’t know.
As soon as someone better catches my eye,
Know that I have gone.
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Para Lúcio

Lucky to have met you,
Unlucky that I can’t be with you,
’Cause my home is in the far North,
I long for you all in the South.
Oh, quanto eu quero voltar,
Tenho que vir, eu sei, pra lá,
Há é muito calor e legal,
Então iréi ter férias.
Mas sabe que tem casa aqui também,
Ultima ano, porque vou iréi mudar-me em breve,
Se queres, pode me visitar na Escócia.
Alguma dia vou ir para Lisboa com amiga pra muito tempo,
Tu sabes com quem ☺
Incréviel como bom amigo você é,
Não queremos partir outra vez,
Yes, ela vem gosta lá, eu acho.
Desculpe, pelo não saber muitas palavras,
Assim, espero que me-entendi mais ou menos,
Só feliz ano novo, aniversário quero dizer,
Igual amor como eu recebi de vocês.
Linda vida você vai ter.
Você tem que saber:
Amizade com você é muito importante pra mim!
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The Messenger



Sun shining high in the sky,
Reggae music is n my mind,
The chill-out melodies make me fly,
Broadening my view – I’m no longer blind.

Giving me courage to state my beliefs,
Letting you know what do we need.
You can’t fall down just like a leaf,
Without leaving a mark for them to see.

Living is not merely being or existing,
Nor enjoying or even reproducing.
It’s giving yourself in return of having,
The chance of life on Earth, experiencing.

The world is changing like it hasn’t before,
Not in thousands of years or even more,
From the time the Atlantis had gone underworld,
And life on the Earth gone beyond control.

Time for learning is about to be over,
And the knowledge of truth should be spread from one another,
Yet so many people believe we’re heading no-where.
A sudden end will probable claim most of them.

I don’t want to seem evil and sadistic,
Just trying to warn you not to be too optimistic.
Nothing will come to you unless you work for it,
So easy ride equals no life for living.

And to think how easy it actually would be,
Just to seek for yourself, your true identity,
The spirit that leads your mind and your body,
To find out what’s behind the entire masquerade.
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Superficial



It was a lovely coincidence,
The way the friendship was made.
Our conversation had been intense,
And our connection remained.

Having a mutual friend changed a lot,
We had so much to talk about.
He even tried to tie our knot,
I had a chance with you, he had told.

Just like a gossip girl he had talked with me,
Trying to get some ‘inner’ information,
How our relationship has developed to be,
If he can witness a new couple formation.

Anyway, that night on the dance floor,
You definitely were groovin’.
With your coming you opened a door,
To more entertainment and active moovin’.

It was a lot of fun and you liked it,
Which made me happy that you had come.
In the States, you said, no brain would click,
To figure out in Estonia such party was done.

Until the next time, I guess,
Is all I have to say.
Maybe the weather won’t be a mess,
So O won’t have to fade away.

How he had laughed over me,
Flirting with you, that’s what he’d like to see.
But no, singing ‘Kiss’ with you had just been fun,
No deeper message to look in there for,
Ay?
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To Felix Kubin


The day of bliss was a Wednesday,
When you arrived in Tallinn,
The first impression had been amazing,
As had been everything.

The happiness had taken,
All power over me.
I was all time so jolly,
Even without sleep.

To be on the same stage with you,
To dance to the same music.
Trying to be helpful too,
It has been so mindblowing.

I hope your mind might mingle,
About how much i've enjoyed it all,
Being your personal angel,
Always ready for a call.

Singing anthem had been weird,
But still for sure a lot of fun,
To see you drinking and enjoying,
Until you kind of passed out.

Remembering nothing of the interviews,
That had taken place in the night,
When the words were getting loose,
And all was broadcasted live.

So thank you again for the experience,
I hope we'll meet soon again,
’Cause now you have Estonian bracelet,
And I considering you my friend.

Hugs and kisses and everything nice,
For you to remember me by,
May a personal assistant be in your sight,
Wherever you might fly.
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Tee miskit emakeelset ka, oleks huvitatud Razz aga YAY väga lahedad!

Edit: Ma märkasin alles nüüd, et ma 3ndal lehel olin. I'm sowwy. Aga su luuleoskus ei ole mitte algaja tasemel vaid pigem sinna noh tead küll, proffesionaalse kanti. Tubli
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Tead, ma põhimõtte pärast väldin kirjutamist eesti keeles. niigi pean seda kuu aja pärast kirjandil tegema.

tore, et meeldib. Very Happy proovin enamvähem sisukaid ka teha, e siis, kui midagi öelda on Very Happy
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All Over



I’m really okay, and this time I mean it,
If before I had done a hard job convincing,
Thin I’ve reached a satisfying result:
I’m finally completely over that punk.

For good I’ve realised who you really are,
And I honestly feel not a trace of regret,
Not yearning, sadness or mad ‘cause we met.
No, just unlucky that me and my friends are now apart.

You too are now one of my friends.
Though nothing more, I dare to assure that.
And even if the rules can bend,
I’m strong enough to mend it back.

Therefore I’m totally free and on the market,
Ready and open for new challenges.
This time I’ll be ready for setbacks,
But on my side is extra carefulness.

I’m happy and confident,
I feel so powerful.
I hadn’t thought this’d have such an affect,
On me, my mind and my soul.

I did learn a lot from this,
To see who cares and values me,
Not just throw words into the wind,
But wants to be with me voluntary.

The freedom in my soul is making amends,
I hadn’t paid attention to it much before,
‘Cause without feeling the difference,
It’s impossible to notice the happiness.

Laugh truly and from the heart,
Mean everything you have to say,
Relax and just play love like dart,
Just don’t bet money so you’d have to pay.

Always look at the bright side,
And pay no attention to the trash,
Which can be found in every mind,
It might not dominate and flash.
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Ja algab uus love series Very Happy
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In


A fraction of a second was all it took,
For you to change it all.
I saw you wherever I looked,
Now that was a serious fall.
A fall that never really ended,
Since you didn't stop it either,
Hence I went deeper and deeper,
And witnessed my heart breaking.
No blame on you, my honest promise,
It was a blessing as it dured,
But when you left, you oughta see,
Left me truly hurt.
I am as in as I know of being,
No regrets, no barriers in my mind.
If given the chance, I would do it,
Do everything you felt was fine.
I would introduce you to my mum,
My gramma, my sister, my brother.
I'd take you to the countryside,
I'd be your angel, lover, your wife undercover.
If only you said how you felt,
It would break the rock in my heart.
The last tender words you uttered...
I went lost in that moment.
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