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PostitaminePealkiri: Tear of a Black Berry   Tear of a Black Berry Icon_minitime19/6/2009, 14:22

Inglisekeelne pealkiri nagu alati :p. Lugu saab lugeda ka deviantart.com-ist. Minu kasutaja on mu foorumi allkirjas.
Vabandust inglise keele pärast ja keelevigade pärast ka!

I was left alone into the darkness. I was alone.
My days passed without time. I was a child.
There, in the darkness were only me and my bunny plushie called Anna.
I shouted in case someone can hear it. But no one could.
I didn't hear anyone shout back.
Suddenly I heard a whisper. Someone whispered my name.
I tried to find the person, who this miserable voice belonged to, but whisper seemed to come from all directions.
Somehow the whispering voice lead me to a white door.That was the only colorful thing I saw in this deep darkness.
The white door seemed to be locked, because when I tried to open it,
the door stayed closed.
Then my thoughts turned to my family. Did I ever have a family?
Or I was alone all the time? Alone. Just me?
Maybe I had someone out there, because another whispering voice that came from the darkness
was familiar.
It belonged to a woman. And this time it came from only one direction.
My head.
The voice reminded me, that I'm still alive and safe. It also told me how to unlock the door.
A tear came out of my eye.
Mother.
My dear mother. It was...the voice was...hers.
Then I walked to the door, thinking of her.
This time the door opened.
There was a bright light in the other side of the door. I closed the door after me and dived into the bright light. The second room in my life. Second color. Second chance.
I became Berry Fair Black.
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PostitaminePealkiri: Re: Tear of a Black Berry   Tear of a Black Berry Icon_minitime19/6/2009, 20:05

Ma kujutasin jutus toimunut perfektselt ette.
Lugesin selle kaks korda järjest läbi Very Happy
Ja alles nüüd suudan midagi kommenteerida Very Happy
Etjah. Pealkiri passib ka perfektselt Very Happy
Et see jutt on perfetkne xD
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